Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “Video games offer benefits to children.” Provide reason and examples to support your stance.
With the advent of new technologies like mobile phones, computers, and the internet, people nowadays are addicted to these technologies. PUBG is the most popular video game not only among children but also among young people. Some children believe that playing computer games makes them the coolest guy. In my opinion, playing computer games is a waste of time and children should not be allowed to play them. I feel this way for several reasons which, I will mention in the following essay.
Firstly, children are too immature to make the right decision, for example, a child is playing GTA VICE-CITY, one of the most popular computer games. This game is designed in a way that is not suitable for children. The character's behavior in the game is brutal and aggressive and that behavior is not acceptable in the real life. children are too immature to take the right decision. After playing computer video games they try to imitate the character's behavior which is spurious
Secondly, Siting eight to ten hours in front of the computer is not benefiting the children, rather it affects the children's mental and physical health. children like to play badminton, and cricket on their computers rather than on children, which makes children weak and feeble. Computer games make the children introverted which makes them reserved.
In the conclusion, computer games are a kind of addiction that not only affects mental health but also affects physical health as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04115226337 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54663027281 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522633744856 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.749431325 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2307692308 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166181010584 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689821884264 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029839126146 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100743124218 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456266379989 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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