The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
Social media has deeply infiltrated into our everyday life and is believed to have the potential to replace human’s face-to-face interactions. From my perspective, while social media may bring about some drawbacks, I would content that its advantages eclipse these negative aspects.
On the one hand, social networks are widely considered as an effective method for information exchange and relationship maintenance. Those working and studying abroad are enable to keep in contact with their family and friends regardless of geographic locations thanks to video-sharing platform such as Skype or Messenger. Moreover, the use of social media may lend a great helping hand to business and marketing sections as they can spread their advertising campaigns to consumers in every corner of the world with a few mouse clicks. Hence, not only reducing advertising expenses but also improving market coverage. Furthermore, the explosion of online platforms give people the ability to choose and interact with everyone they want, this can enhance the harmonization of people from different cultures and countries, which will bring us closer together.
Although social media has many benefits, there still exist some noteworthy drawbacks. The first thing to mention is its contribution to human’s deprivation of communication skills. Since spending a large amount of time on the Internet and getting used to the telegraphic styles can have a negative influence on their real-life interaction skills. People may not be able to understand other’s body language expressions or eye contacts, as a consequence, they will gradually be isolated from real society, even losing sense of community. Additionally, many youngsters prefer living in a virtual world on social sites than engaging in real-life relationships. This may pose a threat to their mental health, such as increase anxiety level and loneliness in the long run.
In conclusion, the drawbacks that social network can replace our face-to-face interactions can not overshadow its major advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
.... Those working and studying abroad are enable to keep in contact with their family an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60897435897 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05030554295 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3724936063 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229013638471 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709879678223 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751523333139 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157837409042 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682382495266 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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