Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some
believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is true that certain advances in technology have brought numerous negative aspects to the environment and people are expected to live simpler lifestyles to protect the environment while others point out that these problems could be addressed by technology. I believe that technology is being developed and it is a good solution to solve the environment.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why people claim that the citizens are supposed to live more simply. In the first place, with the industrious life, carbon dioxide is discharged by the factories and transportation sectors on a daily basis. As a result, this contributes to pollution, which leads to many bad consequences and people have to suffer from a lot of health problems such as pneumonia. Therefore, their living standard would be reduced and they would not be generic as generous as they used to be. Furthermore, the authorities should make full use of the power by means of encouraging their residents to use public transport such as trains or bicycles, it offers the atmosphere become unpolluted.
On the other hand, I believe that technology plays a vital role in environmental protection. To begin with, the governments invest a huge amount of national spending for scientists to develop machines that could be useful for the environment. in fact, with the advance in technology, there is an abundance of machines that could recycle the waste things such as plastic bags or bottles. In addition, citizens can use plastic bags to mix with concrete to form bricks, which hugely contributes to addressing air pollution.
In conclusion, environmental protection is a social responsibility, each individual is also expected to give a hand to protect the environment and can use technology devices to solve it effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...at could be useful for the environment. in fact, with the advance in technology, ...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in fact, with the advance in technology, there is an abundance of machines that c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18150684932 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06649542051 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0289508943 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.083333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255283462057 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946170989589 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101400855505 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166757705264 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11548177145 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.