now relation re not beneficial as they were
People nowadays lives in nuclear family, not even in small family. So, thinking of extended family is outside of view . So I agree earlier people held different relation, different bond, but as the time advances these relations lagged behind. So, I agree that extended family is less important now than it was in the past. There are few reason why I feel so and I will explore them in below paragraphs.
To begin with, things changes a lot with time, so changes in relation is inevitable. People earlier mean a lot to maintain relation. Now not only this generation has changed but elder one also behave same. They don't give that comfort that closeness and things get limited to parents only. Earlier grandparents used to take responsibility of their grandchildren. However, so is not seen now. People used to celebrate events with extended family but now even family member do not appreciate well and someone success become others reason to envy. So, these are changes I observe and this lead to less importance of them. Lets take an instance, everyone has to leave the town to achieve higher education, So my mother used to narrate her story, when she left the town, her whole family came to leave her to next town, visited a lot time that time period, everyone pampered her and she also treated them same way, there was an intense relation of love, give and take. However, I also faced the same situation but literally no one came to drop me even to metro station. The matter of concern is I did not get affected because I wasn't expecting them at all because we all have no such bond with others. So this shows, how with time, relation changed and there importance declined.
To carry on further, the another reason why I feel that these relations are less important and changed with time is lifestyle of this generation. People are so busy nowadays, they don't have proper time to communicate with the member they are living, so it would be difficult to maintain that relation with who are not living in same place. People also started to live in metro city where they live in flat and for older person shifting to such crowded place in drastic change so they avoid to enter there. So, these changes can lead to both way create a distance between relationship. Like for growth and development it is necessary to move to metro city and older people never agree with this decision, and lead to a debate and weak relation. However earlier people don't think of shifting and development so they maintained good relation both ways. If we look apart of older genreation and focus on cousin, then also there is no match, no communication so it lead to a poor bond. For intanse, everyone lives in same city but so busy in thier schedule that don't get a time to catchup once a year but in any fuction they meet , they sometime don't recognise. So, we can see that how broken relation is here.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, well, as to, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2377.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 514.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62451361868 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42766499507 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482490272374 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5145815621 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4230769231 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131251814276 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434855209397 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428891588628 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919771409487 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325689758092 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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