some people say that advertising is extremely successfully at persuading us to buy things.Other people think that adversingingis so common hat e no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opininon.
A section of society opines that marketing is mostly successful at enticing humans to purchase items.However,others are of the belief that promotion is so popular that we do not watch it anymore.I agree with the former because advertising persuades us to purchase products using means like discounts and elite personalities.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument as well as my stance in the subsequent paragraphs with examples.
On the one hand ,I and some school of thought believe marketing entices us to buy products because of discounts.The companies give a percentage on their product which makes individuals buy more.Therefore ,the reduction in the price of the product will allow consumers to consume more.Although Companies will gain profit , citizens will suffer.For example ,a pizza shop does buy one gets one free and this has made a lot of people normally eat more pizza than in the past.Moreover,companies use celebrities to advertise their product to influence the public.Individuals tend to use the product because it is promoted by their favourite artists.
On the other hand ,some societies believe that consumers do not waste time watching advertisements is a lot of businesses are marketing the same product.There are a lot of organisations producing the same item nowadays and making ads to be well known.The individual has watched these adverts several times so does not see the essence of watching again.Hence they tend not to repeat what they know about the ads.For instance,in Ghana,people do not watch advertisements for yoghurt again because they have watched the same advert.
In conclusion,some people and I are of the belief that advertisements influence us to purchase products because of the reduction in price and use of famous people.Meanwhile ,others agree that people no longer watch advertisements because similar items have been marketed several times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38795986622 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4729094431 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.855836706 49.4020404114 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 402.75 106.682146367 378% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.75 20.7667163134 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.25 7.06120827912 443% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162742432422 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107268797697 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040422950293 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107268797697 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040422950293 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.3 13.0946893788 315% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 50.2224549098 -24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.74 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ul at enticing humans to purchase items.However,others are of the belief that promotion...
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...nticing humans to purchase items.However,others are of the belief that promotion is so ...
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...popular that we do not watch it anymore.I agree with the former because advertisi...
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...use advertising persuades us to purchase products using means like discounts and ...
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... products using means like discounts and elite personalities.This essay will disc...
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...like discounts and elite personalities.This essay will discuss both sides of the ar...
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...us to buy products because of discounts.The companies give a percentage on their pr...
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...ct will allow consumers to consume more.Although Companies will gain profit , citizens ...
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...ormally eat more pizza than in the past.Moreover,companies use celebrities to advertise ...
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...e their product to influence the public.Individuals tend to use the product because it is p...
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... favourite artists. On the other hand ,some societies believe that consumers do...
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...e no longer watch advertisements because similar items have been marketed several...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38795986622 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4729094431 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.855836706 49.4020404114 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 402.75 106.682146367 378% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.75 20.7667163134 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.25 7.06120827912 443% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162742432422 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107268797697 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040422950293 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107268797697 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040422950293 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.3 13.0946893788 315% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 50.2224549098 -24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.74 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.