Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star and sport personality-brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Popularity of celebrities is increasing even more if we compared to past 2 decades. Although, being a media icon sometimes prove hard, but the positive aspects are enough to snub that.This essay will elaborate my perspectives to clarify my thoughts.
There are some social evils to adhere celebrations’ life. The dominant one is ‘No privacy, Public legacy’. Apparently, personal life of luminaries has always been an open book for public where personal matters are exposed by reporters. In fact, the paparazzi’s habit of presenting every gathered information with added flavour makes the scenario the worst.Not only they viral positive happenings, but also hurt sentiments of eminent people by spreading rumours. Sava,for instance,an actress was accused of false claim for commencing acting career by paying under the table, which lately proved a rumour by haters.
On other side, relishing a luxurious life being a public choice is second to none! To be more specific, the status they have in society, respect they earn and disciples for good deeds proves rewarding for personal and professional life. Consequently, more likelihood of demand in industry no matters it is advertising or film industry.
Besides, for society’s perspective, celebrities aware masses to stand against wrong deeds and raise voice for their rights. Women empowerment, for instance , could have never been achieved without efforts of celebrities. The government sole could influence the women to be bold and become self dependent. Taking , Priyanka Chopra an example who gained recognition globally for motivating females.
Conclusively, it can be concluded from above paragraphs that no matter what difficulties celebrities have to face, the advantages they enjoy and benefits they provide to society can ignore those minor hurdles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, consequently, if, second, so, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58633093525 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95560475872 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719424460432 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4345526104 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153290367995 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497502597648 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451081524149 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871173160573 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387689078139 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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