The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates how Darwin's waterfront area changed from 2009 to 2014.
Overall, it is clear that the waterfront area of Darwin town witnessed significant development. Most noticeably, the increases in areas and the addition of some areas.
In 2009, in the middle of the waterfront area, there is a lake and an industrial area surrounded by a footpath. Besides, in the south, there is another industrial area, and there are three residential buildings. While in the northwest, there is a school next to a convention center. Meanwhile, in the east, there is a footpath from the middle of the waterfront area that leads to the sea and swimming pool. In the northeast, there is a fishing area.
In 2014, in the middle of the waterfront area, the industrial area is replaced by a new swimming pool, and the lake remained. While the residential building added three more. Moreover, the industrial area is removed and added a footpath that leads to a new harbor. In addition, the fishing area and swimming pool in the east remained unchanged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9209039548 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86094465328 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463276836158 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5359224101 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5833333333 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163846975587 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719411488661 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697798176386 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138214491437 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068909719756 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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