Nowadays, people have cosmetic surgery to improve life. Why do many more people choose these operations?
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
With the growth of cosmetic surgery, there are more people choosing these operations to enhance their lives. This essay will discuss some reasons for this trend and my opinion about whether this development is good or not.
Initially, there are multiple reasons why many individuals tend to have cosmetic surgery. The first reason is the desire of people for their visuals. In the other words, people need surgical intervention as they want to become more beautiful, which can boost their confidence. Secondly, some people choose these operations in order to change their destiny. Although it seems to be unbelievable, there are some situations that have occured in reality. For example, in Vietnam, a man who believes in physiognomy and astrology has spent a large amount of money to lengthen his legs because he thinks that this change will help him become wealthier. Thirdly, following the beauty standard of society is one of the most popular reasons. The case usually can be seen in women who want to become famous on social media.
On the one hand, I think that this development has some positive effects. It is true that everyone has the right to make decisions about their appearances, so the trend of having cosmetic surgery is normal. Moreover, if people feel more confident and happy with their new appearance, it is obviously a good thing. However, I agree that this trend still has some negative sides. Many researches have shown that cosmetic surgery has a multitude of side effects, even severe consequences. Some people might suffer from health problems, others could face the painful sequelae of surgery. In addition, because cosmetic surgery has grown recently, many people still have a negative attitude towards plastic surgeons. As a result, people having cosmetic surgery could be placed under ridicule.
In conclusion, there are several reasons for people to choose these operations such as: beauty standard, personal desire and superstition. Additionally, this development has both positive and negative effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24770642202 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63682698871 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556574923547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2366371429 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374711796837 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113576104346 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700312200287 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24066273353 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480433576696 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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