The first chart below shows how energy used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The given pie charts provide data on proportion of energy consumed for different purposes of average households in Australia and their contribution to greenhouse gas emissions.
Overall, by far the highest proportions of both energy consumption and gas emissions belong to heating, water heating and other appliances, while cooling and lighting rank last.
Looking at the charts thoroughly, heating is responsible for the largest amount of energy use, showing 45%, while the percentage of water heating is twice as much as other appliances ( 30% and 15 % respectively). Similarly, the proportion of energy used for refrigeration is almost twice as high as lighting which accounts for 4 % and that is higher by 2 % than cooling.
As for the contribution of water heating to greenhouse gas emissions, it ranks first at 32%. However , the share of other appliances is smaller by only 4% than waterheating.
Furthermore, there is nearly no difference between the percentages of heating and refrigeration, accounting for 15% and 14% respectively. Lighting and cooling produce the lowest amount of gas emission showing the former 8% and the latter 3%.
- Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree with this view 74
- The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas 78
- The first chart below shows how energy used in average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 78
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- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38333333333 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15224418962 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5716005559 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.125 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246666622161 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102646192308 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695971684384 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130332677595 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611165338979 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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