the picture shows the process of making wool. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons relevant.
The process depicts the way how wool has been produced.
There are ten steps in general, starting with growing a herd of sheep. In the end, the workers have manufactured some materials, including clothes made of yarn and knitted outfits.
After a period of nurturing, the factory workers sheared and collected the wool when the sheep was old enough to provide a sufficient amount of fleece. Next, the yarn was washed and dried using various techniques. Then they put the clean thread into a machine and started to card them into a significant number of different tufts. Alternatively, the labourers gathered the leftover string in another recycling process.
According to the wool tufts, they were stored in appropriate conditions for a while. When the demand for purchasing them increased, these tufts were converted into yarn balls and sold. Regularly, customers use them to knit clothes or do mass production in the fashion field.
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- The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interest in certain sports 11
- The best way to solve the environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 56
- the two bar charts show the proportion of 14 16 year old students studying a modern language in an English speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69336563856 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0312781792 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0527150404043 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226834462034 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333970604703 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408392391937 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401014184865 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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