Societies would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
It is probable that the prohibition on all kinds of advertising would bring beneficial purposes for the societies since it is useless and even cause harm. To a certain extent I disagree with the statement because without advertisements, there will be numerous obstacles to the citizen’s materialistic needs and the government’s tax revenue.
To begin with, there is no denying that every now and then advertisements have been one of the crucial tools for the businessman’s success. They create a wild rage of job opportunities for plenty of people. With the help of ads, small organizations will have the ability to make their products reach out to the users. Therefore, when the government put an end to the marketing industry, there will be no chance for millions of employees and leave a severe impact on their lives. Furthermore, the profits made from a large amount of goods are great contributions to the development of nations and fulfill the government’s tax revenues.
On the other hand, once ads are forbidden, people will be incapable of discovering various useful products or there less shopping choices. In addition, deficient in the tax revenues will exacerbate the society’s prosperity and civilians can endure the unfavorable service in medical and educational aspects.
In conclusion, it is wrong to dismiss the function of advertisements. Aside the annoying, unreliable forms of advertisement, advertising really did its job of boosting the nation’s economy and modernized shopping experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...To begin with, there is no denying that every now and then advertisements have been one of the cru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, really, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39748953975 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30419445866 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648535564854 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8780121133 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.272727273 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180552285831 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543241646882 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531969074755 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100067427719 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621726359874 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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