Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students.
Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Education is the backbone of our society, one of the most prominent key aspects for the brighter future of students.The education system has always been a challenging aspect to manage for the governments and the
institutions . The claimed statement above with the sole perspective of taking only the suggestion and interests of their students while planning courses , might sound good idea for students as well as the
educational bodies because of the interest and passion they will put into their studies . In my opinion , I strongly agree with this claim because of two reasons.
To begin with, The performance of students in their exam will improve drastically and their grades will improve . For instance , let's take Einstein. Everyone knows how genius he
was in Maths and science even history , but do people know that not alike these subjects he hated french and biology . He was never interested in these subjects and thus scored bad grades in these subjects , because of the lack of interest in few subjects the whole results are manipulated and affects the final score. Now , consider instead of these subjects if they were the courses of his personal interest , how good he could have been. Right, so if someone would have interest in the courses he/she is learning , the efforts they will put into that will obviously help one in better scores.
Additionally, students will tend to put more time into their interests rather than the courses they don't like to study or feel bored with. For example, if there were two subjects
from which one had to choose either an interesting one , which he loves to learn and explore or the one which he hates and feels a burden to learn them. one will face many shackles in front of him even if an interesting one is a hard one , he would definitely love to study the same subject . On the other hand he will not even think of studying the boring one which lacks his interest . he/ she would definitely put a lot of effort and time in the interesting one because he would love to learn that course without any burden or external force. Hence, if students have their courses of the same interests they have they will be more motivated and adamant to reach their goals.
Ofcourse, some will argue that the students need to learn every type of courses which are predesigned in the curriculum , that have certain importance for the particular study or field.
However, it isn't mentioned in the above statement that the other courses have to be replaced or redesigned , instead if courses of their interests are added to their curriculum , it will be lucrative for the
students and are gonna support them even after their non academic period , because they haven't crammed it , rather learned it .
- Claim When planning courses educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students Reason Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying Write a response in which you discuss the extent 54
- Claim When planning courses educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students Reason Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying Write a response in which you discuss the extent 54
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, of course, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8547008547 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49628128254 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491452991453 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6248879055 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.647058824 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5294117647 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30934504299 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118206403969 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962376429982 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146032467538 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628520057461 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.