It is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing; it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail. Do you agree with that idea?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words Do not use memorized examples
Most people agree that human's character gets formed during life by decisions they make. Our decisions might end up with success or failure, however, the thing that matters most is we always keep our spirit and retain trying to achieve our final goal. Personally, I believe being sanguine and diligent, even after multiple failures, will give the edge to us. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, we are all human and no matter how precise we plan for our target, there are always unexpected barriers which hinder us from progress. From my viewpoint, as we invest our endeavor on something, we should be mentally prepared for possibility of failure. Taking risks and trying are what make a successful person stands out from others. Additionally, each one of our failures teaches us something, and we can avoid the same mistakes in our next try. Plus, all the people who try hard and move in a right direction will finally achieve their goals. Edison is a compelling example of this. He tried plenty of elements for his transferring wire in a bulb and after hundreds of experiments he finally found the right one. Had he given up at the beginning due to ample failures, he would have never achieved what he desired.
Another significant reason is that somethings are out of our control and we can't determine them no matter how hard we try. However, as human beings we can't anticipate the sequel of anything, thus all we can do is trying for what we are eager to achieve. There might be somethings that we want them so bad, but they can't benefit us we have them. Hence, we can just try for them and leave the rest to God. Moreover, if we don't achieve our goals, we still can set new ones and try for them instead. The thing that is of the highest importance here is that we remain happy and enjoy our life, while we try for integrity.
In conclusion, humans have always tries to improve their life subsistence, and failure was always a part of any plan. We should learn from our failures and move on optimistically. Plus, we should learn that somethings are not meant to be ours and we can always switch to new targets and remain happy.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...omethings are out of our control and we cant determine them no matter how hard we tr...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ard we try. However, as human beings we cant anticipate the sequel of anything, thus...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ings that we want them so bad, but they cant benefit us we have them. Hence, we can ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... leave the rest to God. Moreover, if we dont achieve our goals, we still can set new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, while, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56598984772 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45956372858 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545685279188 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3392078224 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135423700974 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485861046097 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433993240771 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906030547775 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308410293791 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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