Some people argue that technological innovations, such as mobile phone, are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary, the advent of techonology contributes to create a lot of inovations such as mobile phones. Some individuals opine that this creation of techonology making the people less socialize with others. I agree with said notion due to lonelieness of the yougester as well as creation of internet and this eassay will articulate my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
There are a plethora of reasons to keep strenghten my point of view. First and foremost, parent are busy ownig to their busy schedule nowadays. So, they let their childern alone in home. To elaborate it, youngesters are used to play games on their mobile phones to make theirselves busy as well as these habits led to increase the feeling of loneliness in them. If they would play games more and more on mobile phones, then it will affect to their body to make less avail to do physical task in their life. Thus, they make themselves less socialize by spending a lot of time alone in home for using the mobile phones.
Furthemore, not only games, but the invention of internet also make individuals to keep busy on mobile phone. To illustrate it, there are innumerable social media apps that assist to people indulge theriselves keep busy on these apps. For example, facebook, instagram, whatapp and twitter are most preferable apps for using by the individuals. Hence, in this kind of ways internet aid masses to make them less socialize with others.
In conclusion, undoubtely techonology inventions are useful for people, but some inovations are considered bad creations for human being such as mobile phones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0074906367 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75029822568 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546816479401 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7451232361 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231043240732 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077597839853 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677892199788 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134964998787 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348063648318 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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