Homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Last year that region experienced twenty days with below-average temperatures, and local weather forecasters throughout the region predict that this weather pattern will continue for several more years. Furthermore, many new homes have been built in this region during the past year. Because of these developments, we predict an increased demand for heating oil and recommend investment in Consolidated Industries, one of whose major business operations is the retail sale of home heating oil
homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. since the temperature has reduced below the normal, the demand for heating oil has been increased. Furthermore, many new homes have been built in this region during the past year. due to this demand for oil has been grown. people in the region should start to find new resources and proper replacement for oil has a fuel as it is not in abundance.
As the temperature reduces below the average, the usage of the oil has a fuel will increase. As the usage increases the demand for oil also increases. As the demand is increased, oil will become more expensive. if the price is too high not all the families in the town can afford it.
if the application of oil as a fuel becomes more, then the pollution in the place will also grow. smoke is ejected out of the houses everytime oil is used because the smoke needs to be vented out of the house. people suffer from the smoke as a result. These harmful smoke contains carbon monoxide, which affects the health of the people who are living in the place.
The availability of the oil is also a big issue. In normal conditions people not often use oil as a fuel that much compared to when the conditions are extremely cold. So the oil they bought can be used for only few days. if the cold temperature persists for a long time then additional fuel will be needed. has the houses in the place has been increased the availability fuel will be very less compared to what it is in normal temperature.
i conclude by saying that though it looks like the only option for the time being, people should start finding alternative resources for heating their houses as more fuel is used the demand will become more due to shortage in oil,as there is shortage the price will become more. And since the smoke released can cause serious health problems it is better to find an alternative.
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Comments
e-rater score report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 354 350
No. of Characters: 1570 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.338 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.435 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.375 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.527 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.416 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.687 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Homes
homes in the northeastern United States, wher...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...ed oil as their major fuel for heating. since the temperature has reduced below the n...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...lt in this region during the past year. due to this demand for oil has been grown. ...
^^^
Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... to this demand for oil has been grown. people in the region should start to find new ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ases the demand for oil also increases. As the demand is increased, oil will becom...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...reased, oil will become more expensive. if the price is too high not all the famil...
^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...reased, oil will become more expensive. if the price is too high not all the famil...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... families in the town can afford it. if the application of oil as a fuel become...
^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Smoke
... pollution in the place will also grow. smoke is ejected out of the houses everytime ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ke needs to be vented out of the house. people suffer from the smoke as a result. Thes...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...y bought can be used for only few days. if the cold temperature persists for a lon...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Has
...me then additional fuel will be needed. has the houses in the place has been increa...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...what it is in normal temperature. i conclude by saying that though it looks...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...what it is in normal temperature. i conclude by saying that though it looks...
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Line 10, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
... will become more due to shortage in oil,as there is shortage the price will become...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 353.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6402266289 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45865261363 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458923512748 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8126706639 57.8364921388 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9 119.503703932 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 23.324526521 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.70786347227 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272275951531 0.218282227539 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906215593011 0.0743258471296 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106678984428 0.0701772020484 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154857319844 0.128457276422 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119594427379 0.0628817314937 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.3799401198 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.5979740519 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 98.500998004 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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