TOEFL like standardized exam should be considered as whole criteria for admission. Agree or not
Every university has their standardized test, which student has to pass to get admission in that university. Exams are important to evaluate student but to rely on one exam should not be considered. For admission of a student wide prospective should be included so that it give fair chances to students. I think in specific way for several reasons which I will ellucidate in the below paragraphs.
To begin with, Lets talk about TOEFL, it means Test Of English as foreign Language. So, this test is just the single criteria to check the language of student and to evaluate that student that they have sufficient knowledge about English, know the grammar rule and believe this is important too because in foreign, English is the language which is widely used. The main purpose of this exam is that student get comfortable with the environment and has good communication skill because it include all the aspects like Reading, Speaking, Writing, Listening. However, when we apply for universities this is one of the requirement to be fulfilled and many other requirements are there like SOP that is Subject of purpose, LOR letter of recommendation, grades, involvement in other activities. So, all these requirements student should fulfil to get admission. The whole purpose is in this way the evaluate in more detail. Lets take an example of Sop in which the student write the full detail why they want to opt specific field, wwhat is the motivatio, what future u see in specific field and in lor they take reviews from former teacher. If the university give admission on bases of Toefl they only get to know about language but by including other criteria they get the full information about the student and that help university in better selection.
Another reason I believe that only standard exam should not be the whole criteria for selection is this exam only give the detail of that topics included. Student's full evaluation occur when they get admission by passing multiple steps. Like first the clear basic exam, which give a detail of memory, pressure handling capacity. Next university should include physical activity, I believe every field need student to be perfectly healthy and has good stamina so that they can perform well in intercollege competition and last is interview. It gives the hollistic detail because its the main intellectual session. For example UPSE, is the India's biggest competition exam where students who crack that exam get the highest paying job and the officers has high value. In that exam, they take the multiple quiz exam then subjective exam and that is very tough that include almost all the aspect and finally the interview and in most cases students fail in last round. So these student really word hard and they have good skills to work further.
So to sum up all , I believe standardization exam should not be only criteria for admission , university should include many requirement because sometime they may be weak in one section but good in other one. So single exam will prove biased towards those who can do better in that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, really, so, then, well, as for, as to, for example, i think, in most cases, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2563.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94787644788 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63861221256 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471042471042 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 809.1 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0264315969 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281154899749 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918851381699 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856655268803 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219622470939 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055971893065 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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