The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
What is a machine? It is anything that makes our work simple or easier. We have automobiles to travel when we need to. We have air conditioners when we feel warm. We have computers to send emails and mobile phones to send messages to stay in touch with our loved ones. In reality, we are surrounded by machines. A human mind is the architect of all these machines. Our everyday life would have not been this simple if it were not for many great scientists or technologists who put efforts to build such systems for the benefit of the human race.
Yes, machines are inly tools of human minds. They are nothing but innovations which have come into existence through the knowledge and the creativity a human mind possesses. On the contrary, there are also certain implications of these innovations. Since calculators came into existence, the human mind has lost its ability to perform complex calculations. Many might say that this has caused harm to us as humans are no longer able to perform an activity as fast as a machine can. But this does not imply that the calculators are superior to humans in any way. They are mere creations of humans to make their life simpler.
Earlier, there used to be people who would fill in the data for a company. Or make hand-written balance sheets. Also, they used to send hand-written letters. But nowadays, the data of many big companies is handled by supercomputers. The balance sheets are now created in excel and the hand-written letters have been replaced by emails. All of this is possible only and only dur to the innovative thinking and creativity of the human mind. Thus, a variety of mundane tasks have been now automated with the help of machines. Instead, the people concerned with these tasks are now able to concentrate on more complex and important tasks. This also helps them build new skills and abilities to stand out in this fast growing competitive world.
There have been innovations like travelling in space, or flying from one country to another or even travelling underwater with the help of submarines. Even though all these tasks are possible with the help of machines, it tis the human mind that is responsible for the existence of these machines. Nowadays, artificial intelligence and machine learning are new technical concepts that have come into existence. These are useful in the building of robots, etc. which act or behave like humans.
Even after such great advancements, humans are ones responsible for the innovations and discoveries. Yes, the machines surely make the everyday lives of humans simpler but they could never replace the human mind. After all, human minds are the architects behind the development and creation of machines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ave air conditioners when we feel warm. We have computers to send emails and mobil...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: Much might; A good deal of might
...bility to perform complex calculations. Many might say that this has caused harm to us as ...
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Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ter such great advancements, humans are ones responsible for the innovations and dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, after all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90672451193 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69387069367 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492407809111 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.353503242 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6875 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.40625 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.59375 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291103319863 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780914173515 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979346116697 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184064648463 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112559247211 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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