Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why some people believed that children should only use their phones in the weekend or when they are off from school. The first reason is the attention that children pay to the lessons could be decrease due to using phones. For example, it is hard to do the homework effectively when the phone keeps ringing and showing the nofications. Which leads to our distraction, we may curious to what nofication is it. Another reason is the phone is very attractive with children, it can lead the children out of their real life, make them less interested in some healthy activities which causes some illness for children and affects negatively on their study. For instance, with some ill, the children cannot come to school or learn anything which decrease lots of their learning time. In some more terrible situations, it can lead to the mentality problem which makes their life harder.
On the other hand, i would argue that phone should not be banned from children. The main reason why i agree this opinion is the conveniences of the phone. A phone are not only used to entertain. It could also be used for studying and many other purposes like shopping, working online, reading news communicating, especially in the covid 19. The second reason for my opinion is although using phones too much can cause many bad affects to our health, it can help us entertain, relax, blow off our stress if it is used in the current amount of time.
- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 43
- Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should spend 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...heir life harder. On the other hand, i would argue that phone should not be ba...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...nned from children. The main reason why i agree this opinion is the conveniences ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70930232558 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43645581287 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7346765189 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394893562806 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148819240442 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099486555318 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305771579186 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188418773034 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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