The leaders of mosts organizations tend to be older people.However,some argue that younger people make better bosses.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the last few decades numerous companies'leaders have become prone to be youngsters,while most people consider that the old should be given this position because of their work experiences.I totally agree with the former statement and in following paragraphs I try to explain my view.
There are plethora number of reasons which support young bosses.Out of all,the foremost one is that the young are brilliant at using advanced technology which prompts to company's quick development.Furthermore,youngsters have several qualities such as they are adoptive,enthusiastic,determined as well as quick learners which every organisition needs.Because,thisabilities assist them to run a business effectively.
Moreover,it is believed that majority of the young people are full of creativity that would be helpful to make company different from others.As,the changes as well as improvements which are made by innovative by youngstersvalways needed througout the world.Despite their imressive capacities,old people,s many years of work experience is consistently appreciated.However,the products which are launched by youngs stands out the crowd.Thus,working with the young boss is much more enjoyable.
To sum up,although elders have much skills and knowledge,the company which runs by young bosses lasts long due to fresh and advanced ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04188481675 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.74143826367 2.80592935109 169% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685863874346 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.278608561 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.5 106.682146367 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.75 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.25 7.06120827912 358% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854894478616 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527502164283 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447515147421 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527502164283 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447515147421 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.85 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.64 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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