E-mail has had a huge impact on proffessional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive. Do the disadvantages of using e-mail outweigh the advantages?
Email was one of the most powerful technologies that changed the way people over the world connect with others. However, there have been controversies about its benefits and drawbacks. From my perspective, email has been more beneficial to people’s lives in comparison with its disadvantages.
It is true that the rising of email technology has given rise to new problems such as privacy concerns or phishing. Their email address is usually used to register for different online accounts, hence, their email address can be approached by many third parties, which may not be trusted, to exploit personal data. In some cases, users' email addresses may become the target of spamming emails with inappropriate content, or worse, spam emails may consist of risks from viruses, which will harm users’ devices, or their private information can be leaked.
On the bright side, the props of email systems are enormous which makes them so popular and being used in all walks of life. Firstly, it replaced the traditional way of communicating between people. Unlike the traditional mail system, the waiting time to deliver an email is almost immediately, so people can save precious time and enhance their working performance. In addition, several technologies have been provided to improve the security of email systems that prevent risk to users. For example, Google, one of the world's well-known free email services, provide algorithms to identify spam email, that minimise the inconvenience to users.
In conclusion, although email indeed has evident downsides, the upsides of it are obvious that outweigh its drawback.
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| 2023-06-30 | SharmisthaNaskar | 78 | view |
| 2022-09-25 | Halt29 | 11 | view |
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy 73
- E mail has had a huge impact on proffessional and social communication but this impact has been negative as well as positive Do the disadvantages of using e mail outweigh the advantages 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, third, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3359375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78544934029 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9902472151 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.053330211116 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241689305124 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.015750712372 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0353653893223 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205352031329 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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