The Gordon Act, which established a wildlife refuge in the Big Dark Swamp, is currently up for reauthorization. The act prohibits the building of roads or cutting of old growth trees in the swamp, though it permits hunting. Many blamed logging activities for the decline of the bird population, especially that of the dappled grackle. The grackle population has continued to decline since the passage of the law, demonstrating that the Gordon Act has not been sufficient to protect the species. Another nearby refuge, the Wayne County Marsh Habitat, bans all mining, logging, and hunting. Wayne County officials have not reported a decline in the grackle population there. This proves that hunting, not logging, was responsible for the population drop in Broomall County. Thus, Broomall County should not reauthorize the Gordon Act unless it is amended to include the same provisions as those in Wayne County.
The argument that appeared in the Broomall County Times for not reauthorization of the Gordon Act in Broomall County unless it is amended to include the same provisions as those in Wayne County, is rifed with holes and flaws. The primary reason being that the editor of this editorial considered the two County as similar in habitant, nature and their environment conditions and therefore I think the argument is invalid.
First assumption that the editor has considered is the similarity in Broomall County and Wayne County, though it says that Wayne county has banned all mining, logging and hunting, however, it never stated that what is the population of the habitants there and particularly about the grackle population. What if the number of grackles were already relative lesser than the Big Dark Swamp's number of grackles. How different is the environment setup in the Big Dark Swamp and Wayne County refuge.
Also, the Gordon Act does not allow for the cutting of the old trees, perhaps that is the reason the birds population is declining maybe because the older growth has withered entirely and if we don't cut those old trees or at least do some revamping to the refuge maybe the birds would make this refuge as their habitat place.
The editor says that the hunting is responsible for declining in the number of grackles population but this not an evidence backed reasoning, because there is not data for how many birds are hunted down, is it ocassional, too frequent or like on a daily basis. Had it clearly mentioned the data for the bird hunting or better if the editor has provided the exact data comparison between the two county, that would have made more sense.
Furthermore, the editor has blamed the logging activities for the decline of the bird population, but if the logging activities aren't done regularly would it be safe for other animals in the refuge habitat if not birds. Won't other animals would drag down in the marshy areas which will lead to decrease in other habitants of the Broomall County. The logging activities are banned in the Wayne county, maybe because there aren't any huge number of habitants. Had the editorial presented the specfic details to make accurate coomparison between the county, one would be compelled to think if they had to had not to reauthorize the Gordon Act.
Hence, I would say that the editor should first do the diligent verification of the facts and believe the data and not just the canard stories circulating around before providing not so cogent argument in the editorial.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...d trees, perhaps that is the reason the birds population is declining maybe because t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... growth has withered entirely and if we dont cut those old trees or at least do some...
^^^^
Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...pulation, but if the logging activities arent done regularly would it be safe for oth...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 422, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...n the Wayne county, maybe because there arent any huge number of habitants. Had the e...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 433.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90762124711 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52089920916 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471131639723 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.8473053892 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1826250627 57.8364921388 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.461538462 119.503703932 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3076923077 23.324526521 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.70786347227 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242000663084 0.218282227539 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806438621117 0.0743258471296 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607802304232 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107299098434 0.128457276422 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598504508036 0.0628817314937 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.3799401198 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.3550499002 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 98.500998004 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.1389221557 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...d trees, perhaps that is the reason the birds population is declining maybe because t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... growth has withered entirely and if we dont cut those old trees or at least do some...
^^^^
Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...pulation, but if the logging activities arent done regularly would it be safe for oth...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 422, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...n the Wayne county, maybe because there arent any huge number of habitants. Had the e...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 433.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90762124711 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52089920916 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471131639723 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.8473053892 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1826250627 57.8364921388 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.461538462 119.503703932 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3076923077 23.324526521 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.70786347227 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242000663084 0.218282227539 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806438621117 0.0743258471296 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607802304232 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107299098434 0.128457276422 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598504508036 0.0628817314937 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.3799401198 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.3550499002 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 98.500998004 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.1389221557 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.