Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views give opinions.
It is thought that children should start their academic schooling around 3 years old, while people believe that they should study until 7 years old. From my perspectives, children should be encouraged their study at least 7 years old.
On the one hand, going to school early (from 4 years old) will be beneficial for both enhancing social skills and literacy ability. Firstly, young learners are prone to being shy and have a lack of interactions with their peers so kindergarten is the best environment for them to be more confidence. Being exposed to other kids is a great opportunity for them to improve their communicative skills that helps them less fear and intimidity. Secondly, through practical and appropriate curriculum, young students surely know how to read and write by colorful images and active lessons. Therefore, they can develop their vocabulary acquisitions which cannot be learned at home.
Despite the advantages of social skills and early literacy, I am convinced children should delay their entrance to formal schooling. A typical example of this is Findland where every child does not begin school until after the age of 7. This country is well-known because many children have defeated other powerful countries like USA or Canada to reach the top performances in Maths and Science. Furthermore, if children study at their early age, they have been facing with unwanted stress, which means that they are always worried about schoolwork or rules. As a result, they may lose their interests and hobbies even they lack motivations to study later on.
In conclusion, although taking part in formal education at early age are advantageous for children in terms of confidence and early cognitions, I believe children should start their school after 7.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., going to school early from 4 years old will be beneficial for both enhancing so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, at least, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18055555556 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71888081493 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8444815614 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313472810241 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113025075797 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922144932557 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213635274636 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08724847685 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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