The map shows how coastal land develops into a coastal park.
Given are the two maps depicting the modifications of the sea-front area over a course of time, commencing from a rural region into an amusement place.
Perceptibly, the area to the north of cliffs experienced a significant renovations, previous facilities was covered by entertaining-purpose amenities.
Regards the area above the cliffs, in the heart of the area, farm constructions, which was connected with a road in the north of the area, was knocked down to make way for a parking place. To the right-hand side, woods have been grown, which was devoted for agriculture purposes land before. Additionally, a coffee shop has been built to the north-west of the green space, near the road. Likewise, the western side of the farm buildings, animals’ living area and abandoned land was redesigned to a lake, which trees surrounding. After being enhanced, park goers could access the lake and the planting area from the parking space by footpath.
It is noticeable from the southern side of the cliffs, beach is available for swimming and gathering, which is linked with the coastal park with a step through the cliffs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two maps depicting the modification...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'renovation'?
Suggestion: renovation
...rth of cliffs experienced a significant renovations, previous facilities was covered by ent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11351351351 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03543234568 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0903421499 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118783769113 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047321970934 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371870359579 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063793537258 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401336689218 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.