Some people think that studying at a university in another country is the best choice for students, whereas others think it is better for them to study in their own country.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Several arguments illustrate that becoming abroad students is the most preeminent option than domestic ones. While it is true to some extent, I believe that studying in the local universities have also more beneficial aspects than international colleges.
On the one hand, pursuing overseas studies can broaden their mind, outlook, and job opportunities. Admittedly, while global languages are gradually becoming a crucial criterion in most multinational companies, then study in international countries which are especially possessed these languages, they can have the chance to sharpen their fluency, access to technological, and educational innovations, and high-paid jobs in ways they would never experience their own country. While both of them serve as a motivation and inspiration for students, it is clear that becoming an overseas student can support their future career success.
On the other hand, staying in their nation makes people more comfortable as they can connect with their close-knit relations more easily than immigrating to other countries. It is undeniable that there are a plethora of people living in foreign countries who cannot come back to their hometowns because they are occupied with their careers or they cannot afford to pay the costs of coming back home. Although, learning in international nations can obtain a higher quality education, studying in their hometown can bring sustainable relaxation for the student.
In conclusion, although some people might think that learning at international universities is better than at local ones. However, I still believe that domestic academies are the best choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, still, then, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61044176707 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97674627247 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9231347056 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.7 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262686276006 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954674226454 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485909203334 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146797184589 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383829649932 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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