Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people today are living in the belief that the success of career is the key leading to a meaningful life and consider working as the most important part of their life. In my opinion, this stance is totally false because the adequacy of finance does not have the same meaning as the adequacy of happiness, moreover, life has much more things than working.
On the one hand, a meaningful life is a happy life. It cannot be denied that the more successful your career is, the more responsibilities, difficulties, and nervousness you have. Obviously, once undertaking a glittering job, people are demanded to spend much more time working to fulfill expectations. Additionally, taking on a pivotal role requires more effort and a higher level of responsibility since your decision now is across-the-board. Hence, people eventually hardly have opportunities to enjoy their achievements, and hardly find tranquility.
On the other hand, life is made up of many things, not only a career. To think about our life, we could easily see that career and working are just a part of life. Therefore, even if your career is not so successful, that is still not the end of the world. I firmly believe that your life is more worthwhile when helping poor people or blooming the bonding between you and your family, and friends. Since you could find peace of mind.
In conclusion, a successful career is not the only way leading to happiness, there are still more factors that make your life worthwhile.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tween you and your family, and friends. Since you could find peace of mind. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92490118577 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92136844662 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561264822134 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9302447834 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8461538462 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325722502101 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11637274709 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940448857138 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202296844872 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658685936442 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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