The table chart show the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012.
The table chart give information about the settling of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012.
Overall, we can see that the population of New Zealand and of all ages in 2012 is highest, but the population is lowest of under 65+. However, the completely different we can see if we look at the specific figure.
Look at the table chart in 2011. It can be seen that the general of population for all ages is highest among five age groups and have number is 4,400,000 people. Meanwhile, the population in New Zealand lowest is 65+ age group among five age groups and only have 500,000 and ten times lower than the first age group. By contrast, second lower after 65+ is under 15 age group have 801,750 people. However. With remaining two group is 15-39 and 40-64 there is not much date on the deviation, respectively 1,520,000 and 1,400,000.
Look at the table chart in 2012. The population in New Zealand of under 15 age group is lowest and decreased-0,2 % have figure is 800,000. By contrast, the all age groups and 40-64 have significantly increased is 4,460,000 and 1,460,000, both age groups have same percent change is +0,6%. Finally, with the remaining two age groups is 15-39 and 65+. With the population of 15-39 is decreased-0,2% have 1,500,000 but with 65+ is increase percent change is +4,0% have 900,000 in 2012. So, it can be seen that the settling in New Zealand have few people over 65 years old.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...under 15 age group have 801,750 people. However. With remaining two group is 15-39 and ...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'group' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'groups'.
Suggestion: groups
...750 people. However. With remaining two group is 15-39 and 40-64 there is not much da...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'figured'.
Suggestion: figured
...roup is lowest and decreased-0,2 % have figure is 800,000. By contrast, the all age gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63453815261 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52062214542 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449799196787 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6119496149 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4285714286 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222855553523 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125688073826 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137228862075 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215927106388 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128486458668 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.