Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express an interest about computer course which you gave an advertisement in newspaper last week. I really want to take this course due to high demand of my area and future career.
I am a business student and have completed B. Com and major was accounting. As I mentioned, I have not any skills of computer due came from poorly rural area were lack of advanced technology. I eagerly interest about enrolling this course as there are no institution of my area. As you mentioned that, if someone wants to take this, they need to have completed elementary course. However, since I have not been skilled by computer, it would be possible to make special exception for me to enroll in the course. It would be really appreciated if you are enrolling me to this course.
Thank you for your kind consideration and hope to hearing your positive response soon.
Yours faithfully
najam
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-12-15 | Amna Zeeshan | 78 | view |
| 2023-12-15 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
| 2023-11-23 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-30 | nijam | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-30 | nijam | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mand of my area and future career. I am a business student and have complet...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...career. I am a business student and have completed B. Com and major was acco...
^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ositive response soon. Yours faithfully najam
^^^
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...response soon. Yours faithfully najam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75460122699 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67843233519 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6245040603 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4545454545 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358457865892 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112933223673 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778654415482 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213671697923 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891254836579 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.