The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Each country have scientists, artists and rulers, but the general people also contribute in the development and welfare of their country. People of the country helps the nation become a developed nation. Welfare of people is an important aspect for an indication of a great nation.
The standard of living of people in a country contributes towards a great nation. Developed countries have high wages for labours which results higher standard of living. High wages will reduce poverty of the nation. Developed countries have high number of businessmen and entrepreneurs.They bring up new opportunites and opens up new jobs for people of the nation. Entrepreneurs and Businessmen have a huge contribution towards the the development of the nation.
Each country’s happiness can be found out from happiness index. A lot of countries have very low index. People of their countries are unhappy to live in that nation. Irregular and strenuous working hours can reduce the happiness index. Lot of work load and very less break reduce the productivity of a person. For the welfare of the nation, government have to make rules regarding the working hours of an organisation
Safety is one of the most important factor. Some countries like India, it is unsafe for a woman to travel alone at night. Being an Indian woman, I think the nation will become developed and be considered a great nation if each and every citizen feels safe to walk back home at night. Healthcare of a person is very important. Good healthcare facilities and quality medical facilities at an affordable cost will be beneficial for the people of the nation. The nation should work for the people.
Today’s generation has recognised the importance of mental health but not all can afford the expense of visiting a counsellor. The nation should invest more in mental health related issues and promote about it in schools and colleges. Every school, colleges and office should have a counsellor to whom a student,teacher or a worker can consult to and be able to take care of his/her mental health.
Each country have unique and different cultures. Country like India, where each state have different festivals,food and language should promote their culture and try to prosper it. The agility of cultural aspect also brings up the welfare of the citizen and other countries can learn about it too.
A great nation is a nation that works for the people and by the people. Each and every person contributes towards the nation.Not just scientists,artists or rulers but teachers,students and businessmen contribute equally. A country will only develop if it gives more importance to its people and welfare of them and their families.
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- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement a 50
- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement a 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
...number of businessmen and entrepreneurs.They bring up new opportunites and opens up ...
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Suggestion: the
...essmen have a huge contribution towards the the development of the nation. Each coun...
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Suggestion: the; the
...essmen have a huge contribution towards the the development of the nation. Each coun...
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...ould have a counsellor to whom a student,teacher or a worker can consult to and be able ...
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...here each state have different festivals,food and language should promote their cultu...
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...y person contributes towards the nation.Not just scientists,artists or rulers but t...
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Suggestion: , artists
...s towards the nation.Not just scientists,artists or rulers but teachers,students and bus...
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...cientists,artists or rulers but teachers,students and businessmen contribute equally. A c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2271.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11486486486 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90990555183 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443693693694 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4431908715 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1071428571 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.32142857143 5.21951772744 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141418598596 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474113706664 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045895936259 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846323509517 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638230464558 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.