A new shopping center is going to open in your town. at present, nobody knows what kind of shops or facilities are going to be provided for customers. what shops and facilities would you like to see made available to the shopping public? give reasons for your answer and make useful suggestions for the shopping center’s management.
The significance of shopping facilities which was always debatable has now become more contentious with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others disagree. In my opinion, the advantages of new shopping mall are a more logical. This essay will explicate how management will provide some useful facilities to the customer in the looming paragraphs.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further the first and most important benefits of the shopping mall is that free home delivery to the customer. If management makes door to door free service, customers will buy more from the shops. Another striking advantage in this regard is that online service for the shopper to purchase different types of consumers from online and pay by any bank cards. Thus, it cannot be overlooked that the main benefit for this is that getting daily needs from home by shopping malt huge opportunities to time consume.
Moving forward, one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact that it is important to mention that authority should provide different types of items for buyer to buy from one place and top up all bills, would be great advantage. Furthermore, management should provide parking and play zone for kids to all shoppers. Moving on, it is clearly stated that why many people are in favor of the shopping facilities from new center in own town.
In conclusion, according to the arguments mention above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of shopping mall are indeed too great. Thus, I believe that management should take more steps for customers to make a good shopping mall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04494382022 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63794340131 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1955094501 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244443639972 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935117607217 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480976160508 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15244748118 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226333959097 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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