Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out.
What are the causes?
What are the solutions?
Feeling insecured whether at residents for at home has been a matter of concern all over the globe specially in this modern epoch. To my mind, there are several causative factors behind this notion which intend to be elucidated in the ensuing segments along with possible measures.
First and foremost cause of scared people is escalation in uncivilized activities. To corroborate further, crime rate has been increasing at faster pace like kidnapping, murders, rapes and a lot more; due to which individuals do not feel safe to go outside not only at nights but also during the day time. People, for instance, with heavy chunks of money avoid going outside without security; as they may be victim of burglaris. What is more, some nations are victim of wars like Ukrain and Russia where other mega countries want to possess. Attacks, therefore, can be easily seen in such nations where natives are always worried about their lives. As such, international attacks are also the reason of insecurity of folks.
However, feeling not being safe can be overcome through taking stringent steps by not only laws but also media celebrities and so on. In case of government, policy makers should definitely punish hardly to criminals who create havoc all around. They should be given capital punishment in cases of henius crimes like murder, physical assaultations and many more. So that other criminals can learn lesson to be punished and by this they may take step back. Similarly, celebrities need to make documentary movies to make the people aware about how to protect themselves in such grave situations where media can help them to spread the information. Last but least, global issues can the solve the issues by organising the meetings instead of taking help of wars.
To recapitulate, after analysing above mentioned aspects, I vehemently vouch that the reasons of unprotectiveness like murders can be controlled in many ways which would definitely be helpful to make the globe a beautiful place to live in.
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| 2022-11-12 | yoyo123456 | 89 | view |
| 2020-03-27 | hdahiya | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'punish'.
Suggestion: hardly punish
...rnment, policy makers should definitely punish hardly to criminals who create havoc all aroun...
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Line 3, column 679, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tion. Last but least, global issues can the solve the issues by organising the meetings i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05722891566 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67996300317 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64156626506 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8055077481 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141951571747 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419637463813 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413921161461 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759745644378 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413034943459 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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