Some people say that international sporting events contribute greatly to peace and stability in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The options for maintaining healthy relationships in the international sphere have recently become a topic for tempestuous debates. In this regard, an opinion exists that sportive cross border activities may assist to establishing mutually beneficial interactions between countries. I completely agree with the abovementioned position due to the reasons marked herein after.
First of all, athletic events are sure to contribute to the idea of the people's friendship. Sportsmen from all over the world gather together at one place for sharing the joy of competitions which is good for building respectful relationships on the world arena. Moreover, the locals of the host country get acquainted with other nations learning the very gist of tolerance. For example, according to the Russian scientist Kim V.I., the Olympic Games of 2018 fostered creating a dozen of Chinese learning centers in Moscow. Thus, sports festivals for international representatives are likely to contribute to the peaceful development of the international communication.
Secondly, sporting events create the environment for meeting the heads of the nations which is vital for expanding diplomatic intercourses. Interactions between athletic occasions may benefit to installing long-term ties setting a political tradition on communication with a particular state. Moreover, holding parleys at the summit level during the sports arrangements will be vital for maintaining harmonic attitudes.
For example, as per the Tass, 32% of the border conflicts were settled after the private discussions held between the leaders of the nations during the international sports events. Thereby, the negotiations at the athletic festivals are important in designing the contacts with the foreign officials.
To sum up, international athletic events may be valuable for regulating political intercommunications and dealing international problems. Holding formal talks between heads of the states during the Olympic games and other sports festivals are productive for sustaining world peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90969899666 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27462496244 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3082062047 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.8 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140204916628 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520202301977 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560462555903 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079774253077 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436167774734 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.