The use of social media, such as Facebook or Twitter, is replacing face to face contact in this century. Do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage?
In this digital age, there are many ways for us to communicate with each other. Some people say that contacting via social media is better than talking eye-to-eye, however, from my think of view, this may bring about more drawbacks than benefits. This essay will present reasons for my point of view.
To begin with, contacting online can help us to save money to meet each other. For instance, the number of people who use Facebook and Twitter has increased rapidly in recent years. This means they can talk to their family and friends who live far from them more easily, without paying too much money for traveling or international call charges. In addition, students who study abroad prefer using free communication applications to keep in touch with their parents because they can update their lives constantly.
On the other hand, there are numerous disadvantages in terms of spending lots of time on the internet instead of direct meetings. Children who always look at their phones are not able to behave properly to adults. People may not have a chance to improve their socializing skills if they do not have in-person conversations. For i.e, couples who chat on Snapchat or Messenger all the time tend to have a weak bond and their relationship may not last long. Another flaw is that virtual communication is not as effective as real communication. Messages cannot express our feelings in the most accurate way. Confusing messages can be misunderstood by others, which causes cyberbullying.
In conclusion, although these applications have some respectable advantages, there are also some significant downsides. In some difficult situations, it is acceptable to converse without meeting face-to-face, but everyone needs to arrange a time to meet in person rather than only using their phones.
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- The use of social media such as Facebook or Twitter is replacing face to face contact in this century Do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage 95
- The use of social media such as Facebook or Twitter is replacing face to face contact in this century Do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84451574811 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656462585034 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4366085478 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159554870867 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427974477168 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441154851314 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901645489182 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439985251931 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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