The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last two centuries.
Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
new Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">In this day and age, technology development is evolving quickly so people have many views about important subjects for the future. Some believe that students should focus on studying science and technology, which is useful in the next many years. While the others consider people should chase their hobby. Both these views are justifiable but I personally lean towards the latter.
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new Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">On the other hand, I agree with the latter that students should concentrate on their hobby to have a better life in the future. In the present day, there are a lot of students who have a terrible academic performance in science and technology because of tediousness and lack of motivation due to following advice about the importance of these subjects in the future. this problem causes students to skip class and drop out of school, making them fall behind with studies. Secondly, no one can guarantee that science and technology jobs are useful in the future. because there are many fields burgeoning quickly beside them, numerous new jobs in other fields will be needed in the next many years.
new Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">In conclusion, it seems to me that although science and technology subjects are necessary for students today, studying whatever students like can help them achieve better outcomes in the future.
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| 2022-11-16 | Nam001 | 11 | view |
| 2021-09-25 | Lunar Tran | 78 | view |
| 2021-09-25 | Lunar Tran | 84 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2475.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 6.34615384615 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.47153389617 2.80592935109 159% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45641025641 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.1389289184 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.034253983571 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169821572023 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0141817024711 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0233349728735 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153484543694 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.85 12.4159519038 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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