The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
This report derives from the presented pictorial demonstrating the production process of sugar utilizing sugar cane as principal raw material.
Generally speaking, The generation of sugar is a seven-steps process which starts with the farming of sugar canes and ends with drying and freezing sugar before consumption.
At first, it takes about 12 to 18 months to grow sugar canes prior to reaping them for further usage. However, the harvesting of these plants can be done by means of tractors or manually by hand. Next, the produced canes are crushed in a machine with two rotating wheels to squeeze the juice out of them. This liquid is filtered by a limestone filter in order to purify and remove harmful residuals.
A glance at the graph also reveals that, after purification of sugar cane juice, it is boiled at a very high temperature therefore, the liquid evaporates and juice becomes syrup. This manufactured syrup is passed through a centrifuge which separates the sugar crystals from the syrup. In the final step, the crystals are dried and cooled in an steel jar before consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 342, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...p, the crystals are dried and cooled in an steel jar before consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06043956044 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70225232216 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0244952111 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326273065503 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117366217542 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110971530345 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209456055463 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782135696478 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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