You Have Recently Started Work In A New Company
Dear Ross,
I am writing to inform you that I have resigned from Google and I joined in Microsoft as senior software developer from October 1st 2022 which I had informed you that reason for resignation was seeking a new challenging role.
Surprisingly, I am excited to inform you that my current working environment is far better than while I was in previous company because all my peers have culture of understanding that how a new bee faces the situation in new office although I got an opportunity to work in morning shift so that I can keep healthy life style with physical exercise in evening. Besides that, the client which I suppose to give support is the company located in your country especially from your local area.
Apart from all above, I had met one of our old friend which we were working together during the pandemic and I hope you got an idea that to whom about I am talking.
Yours Faithfully,
Raju
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- Educating Young People Is Naturally Important However Some Think Governments Ought To Invest More In Education For Adults 84
- How companies use different method to increase sales of their products Discuss and give your opinion 84
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child Write a letter to the parents In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would 73
- Educating young people is naturally important However some think governments ought to invest more on education for adults in need To what extent do you agree or disagree 74
- Some people feel that with the rise of artificial intelligence computers and robots will take over the roles of teachers Do you agree or not 52
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, while, apart from, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62424242424 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61579577022 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.138129109 44.8134815571 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.6 76.5299724578 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 16.8248392259 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247986444544 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102992187992 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08355708162 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154782301299 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620384540672 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 8.37731958763 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.