Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Availability of the internet is one of the most rising questions nowadays, whether the government should make the internet free or not for all people. The prompt is suggesting that the internet should be easily available to people as roads are easy to use. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with this suggestion of making it free for all citizens because its disadvantages have control over its advantages.
Firstly, the internet contains many types of content including violent, illegal, and unethical categories content. When the internet will be free for all of the country's citizens, they will browse things that are not necessary. For example, during the spreading of COVID-19, all the classes were held via the online platform, and mobile phones were easily accessible to the student, and if the internet had been free at that time they could misuse the phone. If it costs money to buy the internet, then their parents would keep track of their children and how much data would have been used by them. But in the case of free internet parents would not know how, when and what are they searching for instead of studying through the internet.
Secondly, to make the internet free for all citizens, the government needs to pay all the money from their reserves. For any poor country, it won't be a feasible option. For example, the people of Bangladesh are now facing a lack of energy for producing enough amount of current. In such a critical time, it would not be a great decision for the country to spend money on making the internet easily available for all of its citizens. Moreover, a study found that Bangladesh should invest money in decreasing the rate of unemployment throughout the country. That is why the country should not spend people's money in a way just to satisfy a group of people only.
Some may argue that the internet is the easiest way to learn any topic and that using the internet can be the bridge between an illiterate person to an educated person. But misuse of the internet can be a weapon to destroy a nation's future.
Finally, the internet should be available to all citizens but some conditions needed to be applied to the use of the internet. And before using it people should think twice about whether they are using it for the betterment of mankind or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ent. When the internet will be free for all of the countrys citizens, they will browse thi...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ld keep track of their children and how much data would have been used by them. But ...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...sfy a group of people only. Some may argue that the internet is the easiest way to...
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Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peoples'?
Suggestion: peoples
...se of the internet. And before using it people should think twice about whether they a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.765 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50087484693 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4307591213 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233507777287 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828791220681 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508229572821 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144136437708 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386830075146 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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