It is increasingly common for young people to take a gap year between school and university or after graduating from university and before starting work.
Why do you think people like to take a gap year?
What do you think is the best way to spend a gap year?
It is true that taking a gap year before going to university or joining the workforce is becoming a prominent trend among the younger generation. There are several reasons that lead to this phenomenon and I also believe that with careful plans, young people can attain lots of benefits from a year off.
To begin with, one reason that people prefer to take a break is that it is an appealing opportunity for them to be physically and mentally relaxed. It is a common practice that after a long period of hard work or study, young adults tend to spend a certain amount of time to recharge and eliminate all stressors before they could be ready to face new challenges, such as moving to higher education or applying to a new firm. For instance, a research conducted by Harvard University in 2010 had shown that less than 20% of first-year students who did not suffer from anxiety and depression were those that took a year break. Moreover, taking a long break can provide favorable conditions for young people to acquire new skills that are necessary for their learning course or future career. A good example is that people in Vietnam often spend the break time to study new languages or communication skills, some of the most essential things that can help them secure their success in any circumstances.
In terms of gaining benefits from a gap year, I am of the opinion that people should set up a thorough scheme to make use of it effectively. In fact, the younger generation has a tendency to travel for recreation and exploration. By doing this, they can find a way to relieve the pressure as well as enjoy numerous cultures and stunning landmarks across the world. In addition, taking part in volunteering activities is also a good chance for young people to not only learn a significant amount of valuable knowledge but also discover their area of interest since volunteerings ranges from economic development to helping the poor people.
In conclusion, I think that taking a gap year can bring about tons of merits for young people, regarding their relaxation and learning new things. In addition, travelling and doing volunteering work may also be very useful for them to make a gap year worthwhile.
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- It is increasingly common for young people to take a gap year between school and university or after graduating from university and before starting work Why do you think people like to take a gap year What do you think is the best way to spend a gap year 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79581151832 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70960997921 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565445026178 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2038667587 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.923076923 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3846153846 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1538461538 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349544508436 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118808542223 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661950355711 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22675147115 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482118120547 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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