n the United States, medical information about patients traditionally has been recorded and stored on paper forms. However, there are efforts to persuade doctors to adopt electronic medical record systems in which information about patients is stored in electronic databases rather than on paper. It is argued that storing patients' medical records in electronic databases has several advantages over traditional paper-based record keeping.
Based on the reading passage USA deiced to use electronic medical database over traditionally paper forms. Therefore, keeping this in perspective, author believe there are several advantages associated with this change. However, the professor cast-doubt on these reasons, suggesting three points, concerning why these advantages do not make sense.
The first point mentioned in the reading passage is, electronic data base record can help to reduce costs, whereas hospital do not need to keep paper records. This point is challenged in the lecture as, unlikely of this perspective, papers do not thrown away. The reading passage does not take into consideration that, this paper records would be saved for urgent situation. Therefore, the whole point regarding it would be priceless, is refuted in the lecture.
Although it was suggested in the reading that electronic medical records are vital to diminish medical errors. This point is rebutted in the lecture as, it would not eliminate the errors since most doctors still use pen and paper during clinical evaluations. Another point mentioned to question the validity of this claim is, after a while from clinical evaluation, recorders save data on computers and if some doctors have poor hand writing the error is inevitable. Hence, this fact that electronical record prevent from errors cannot hold true.
The author in the reading passage assert that electronic medical records can greatly help medical research by making it possible to gather large amounts of data from patient records. This point is, further, come into question in the lecture on the grands that researches have a really difficult access to database. In fact, the reading fails to consider the fact that, collecting data from patient documents need a chain of permission even from patient due to high level of privacy and sometimes, some patient block access of anyone to their profiles. Thereby, the validity of this claim in the reading is also in question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...riceless, is refuted in the lecture. Although it was suggested in the reading that el...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'really difficult access'.
Suggestion: really difficult access
...ture on the grands that researches have a really difficult access to database. In fact, the reading fails...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, really, regarding, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 317.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29337539432 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61354896248 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539432176656 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 419.366225166 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7594677514 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162527576794 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611682420149 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618020438025 0.0662205650399 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10367305973 0.162205337803 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349747713991 0.0443174109184 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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