The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present.Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The two maps illustrate the seaside village and how it grow from 1995 to present.
Overall, the village witness radical changes with the most noticable being the replacement of golf and tennis for farmland and forest park.
In 1995, the farmland and forest park located to the northest of the village but at the present, it were transformed into a large space for golf and two tennis courts. Rows of housing still remained un changed along the road which ran from the north to the centre but they was changed about the number, now, they are more eight houses in the rows of the housing. Besides, the road which were under the rows of housing were also broadened to the west and had two houses sideways. On the southest corner of the street, there were a car park which was appeared next to a hotel. Shop and fish market near the sea was demolished and adjusted for restaurant and apartments. Morover, fishing port on the sea were also devastated after many years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'grows'?
Suggestion: grows
...lustrate the seaside village and how it grow from 1995 to present. Overall, the v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63953488372 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24839946679 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9229458861 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993767697998 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524601933049 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717227276088 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106402134614 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764225767979 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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