Doctors recommend that older people do regular exercise. However, many older people do not take enough. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to encourage older people to exercise more?
Elderlies’ health is people’s concern today since many of them are easier to get sick due to their age so that it is recommended for them to conduct daily exercises. Nevertheless, this solution is hard for them. This essay will explain the causes of this phenomenon and the possible solution to encourage them to do exercise.
Firstly, it is obvious that the more you get old, the easier you get exhausted. This means that older people are not fit as youngster are, due to that fact that their metabolism rate are decreasing so they would be weaker. Because of this, it would possibly be harm for them if they did some extreme exercises, inasmuch as some exercises require lots of body movements. By this, it can be said that there are some exercises which are not suitable for elderlies. Moreover, the support from their relatives are low, meaning that they are neglected so that the will for doing exercises is relatively slight.
Leading to possible solutions, elderlies could do some exercises whose movements are simple in order to reduce injures. By this, it can be said that they can still do daily exercises as long as its movements are simple and does not require a lot of energy. To give you an idea, in China, the elderlies are used to doing Thai Chi which does not have extreme movements. Furthermore, the family can look after their elderlies by giving them support to do regular exercises. This can be seen as major factor to make elderlies be aware of their health.
In conclusion, it can be admitted that inappropriate exercises and less support from family are the reason why older people are reluctant to do exercises. The possible solutions for this trend are doing suitable exercises and getting more support from relative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81727574751 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59352495141 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481727574751 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.540572965 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334762115597 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12040242996 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703707272073 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223774281074 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735452012824 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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