In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, many activities done by teenagers and several by them do it and night. It needs aware from person who has a relation with teenagers. In this essay I would examine the reason few region in United State not allowed to be outside from home at night time except they are accompanied by older person or parent. The end of article, there is sum up to get conclusion.
Some of reasons why that regulations impose. Firstly, in some areas of US has a high crime because that is dangerous for young peoples or kids such as many robbery at few store or stealing. As a result for young kids, they can be more safety at their home at curfew. Secondly, every single person free to own weapons such us gun or variety of it. Sometimes, many accidents done by drunkard or crime gang it is dangerous for everyone.
Role of government is important who can apply regulation which useful for civilization. These are some punishment for person who violates it. Government can transmit information throughout advertise such as commercial television or media online. The other hand, role of parents or older sibling more important because directly they communication and educate for young person, for instance dangerous at night activities at outdoors and they must give another option to solve that, such as doing activities at home like cooking.
To sum up that article, awareness for kids is important particularly activities a curfew. Significant role to warn it is from government and family.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun region seems to be countable; consider using: 'few regions'.
Suggestion: few regions
...n this essay I would examine the reason few region in United State not allowed to be outsi...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the reasons') or simply say ''Some reasons''.
Suggestion: Some of the reasons; Some reasons
...le, there is sum up to get conclusion. Some of reasons why that regulations impose. Firstly, i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun robbery seems to be countable; consider using: 'many robberies'.
Suggestion: many robberies
...erous for young peoples or kids such as many robbery at few store or stealing. As a result f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... warn it is from government and family.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90873015873 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73802334849 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.9355203214 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181263135709 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546820683163 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057315143231 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108228328738 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421939672689 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun region seems to be countable; consider using: 'few regions'.
Suggestion: few regions
...n this essay I would examine the reason few region in United State not allowed to be outsi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the reasons') or simply say ''Some reasons''.
Suggestion: Some of the reasons; Some reasons
...le, there is sum up to get conclusion. Some of reasons why that regulations impose. Firstly, i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun robbery seems to be countable; consider using: 'many robberies'.
Suggestion: many robberies
...erous for young peoples or kids such as many robbery at few store or stealing. As a result f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... warn it is from government and family.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90873015873 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73802334849 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.9355203214 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181263135709 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546820683163 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057315143231 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108228328738 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421939672689 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.