In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Are there more advantages or disadvantages of this trend?
Technology is getting predominant in today’s time. This leads to the fact that instead of storing knowledge in books, it’s getting prevailing for people to keep what they have absorbed on the Internet. My stance on this issue is that the benefits it brings about outnumber its drawbacks.
The first point is that Internet provides more convenient functions. While books only offer room to contain pages of letters and pictures, the Internet is able to comprise of an infinitive amount of sentences, images, videos and sound as well for good. Furthermore, storing knowledge on the Internet allows people to be economical on time. For instance, when students have to review and prepare for the examination, they can get what they need on the spur of the time only by searching information , which have been arranged according to the outstanding titles and key words. Therefore, it is the most superior choice for people filled with business and dealines. Last but not least, keeping knowledge in this way makes people share it without delay and especially, not having to move out their homes.
On the other hand, this trend do harm in some ways. Firstly, the information on the Internet hasn’t been confirmed exactly yet. Unlike books, which have been checked cautiously before being published, the Internet enables people to pose whatever thay want without principle. More seriously, people’s knowledge can be stolen. The security of Internet has been a hot potato. Hackers can break into your computer and get the information from it. This also involves in the matter of possession because if people write a book, they will be credited for it. But on the Internet, everything is messy.
All things considered, after weighing up the pros and cons of this matter, from my viewpoint, it’s absolutely beneficial to keep information on the Internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 2, column 565, Rule ID: KEY_WORDS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keywords'?
Suggestion: keywords
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12171052632 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67864237374 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3769497577 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314574057572 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101465243846 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982839527917 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182279517801 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738314336233 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.