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What are the advantages and disadvantages of having microchip implants by healthy people?

Since the development of modern medicine and its integration with advanced technologies, having microchip implants has become a good option, sometimes even for healthy people. This essay will suggest that storing some data about people's medical condition, their private information and the opportunity to call an ambulance without any other gadgets are the biggest advantages of this but the risk of identity thefts and likelihood of origin of cancer are the primary disadvantages.
The main advantages of implanting microchips are an opportunity to save a lot of information by means of only one device and to ask for help calling doctors without resorting to other gadgets in some sudden situations. For people who forget something quite frequently it is better to use these appliances as approaches to saving various kinds of information rather than having thousands of notices on the phone. For instance, some of my familiar absent-minded people would like to have microchips because it is convenient for them to save things like accounts, passwords, and data about allergic reactions in one place. Moreover, there are some unexpected situations like a heart attack in which even healthy people cannot call an ambulance and ask for help. For these special occasions microchips are rather useful and could save people's lives. For example, there are high mortality rates from heart attacks and if people having susceptibility for such chronic diseases had been fitted with microchips, they could have had a chance to survive.
Despite these advantages,thieves will be able to extract some personal information from implants and microchips could lead to the appearance of cancer cells in the bodies of healthy people. The point is that there are bundles of data in these appliances, not only about medical conditions but also about people's private lives. And if some hackers had “turned a lock” they would have invaded the personal space of people and their data would have been at stake. For example, according to IT-specialists, the outcome could be quite deplorable. People could lose all of their data and so they should weigh the risks conscientiously. Furthermore, microchips could elicit some diseases and lead to the origin of cancer cells. For instance, according to some scientists, there were a lot of experiments on dogs and rats and because of injections of microchips animals have felt worse and worse due to the appearance of cancer. And so researchers put faith in that such a situation would be able to happen with people having microchips.
In conclusion, having microchips by healthy people can be advantageous if it allows people to save a lot of information or to call an ambulance without other devices. However, they should also be careful because such appliances could lead to identity thefts and the possibility of cancer.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 459.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23093681917 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91936721612 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464052287582 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2401636902 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.388888889 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286436529734 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100776293713 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688408163937 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20532185269 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136011413692 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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