Advertisements are becoming more and more common everyday life. Is it positive or negative way development?
Some people believe that advertise is more viral and popular nowadays. In my perspective i partly agree with the positive’s idea in this statment.However, these also have many core problem about negative development.
Firstly, the benefits that advertise can bring to users is provide customers with information about the companies’s product or their services. As a result, people can make better choices when they have to choose their products. For instance, by watching Tiktok commercials about brands of clothes. The admin of these brands will list all information related to the product that you need lead to easily smart shopping. Not only clear the details information but also take the amount of voucher through the advertisement. In addition, advertisements can help you raise your awareness and knowledge about product development rapidly. For example, technology devices such as smartphones helping people discover.
In other hand that we must mention is the negative development about advertisement. An organisation has to spend a huge amount of money on seeding. Therefore, increasing the cost of thier products and services. Advertising encourages people buys unnecessary things. For instance, a marketing plan of Apple to youth’s habitat about shopping. They desire using new iPhone despite thier needs of work or study not closing. In addition , some organisation spend to much money on advertisements and forget the quality of thier products or services leads to customer have a negative vision about negative; have a negative influence in some company that thier products or services are good.
Inconclusion, the advertisement can be positive or negative are depend on your using. Therefore, in my opinion, although adverise is a friend, it can be enemise when you lack of knowledge
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48571428571 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08035024671 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3656644927 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137889378883 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425755889674 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567549364519 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946846200375 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442987717329 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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