Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is widely believed that living in a country where the official language is different from yours would cause numerous problems, in both social and practical areas. As for me, I agree with it, and I think those difficulties are not easy to avoid.
When we enter a new environment, the main and most important thing for us is to establish a social network with local people, but it is challenging for most of us. The unique culture always leads to a unique speaking style, and we need time to adapt to it. However, during this process, we are concerned about whether we have said anything inappropriate, and sometimes we may be hurt by others' words, even if that's not their intention. For example, a student may get some wrong messages, such as dissatisfaction, from his tutor because the words that his tutor uses are too strict but normal in the local culture.
There are also some practical problems we may face after moving to a new country with a different language. First of all, the students may feel nervous when there is a presentation or assignment that they usually cannot get a good grade because of the low rate of vocabulary and the lack of confidence. Then it also occurs when we are hunting for a job. Native speakers are normally the better choice for companies that are unwilling to spend time and money developing their employees' communication skills. Finally, everyday life is also influenced by language; there can be more problems than we think when we go to the supermarket or hospital.
In conclusion, I believe that the difficulties that an unfamiliar language can cause are incalculable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...we may be hurt by others words, even if thats not their intention. For example, a stu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, as for, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81720430108 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80474137318 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6866207589 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145185942113 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553360809006 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058474976264 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104825066405 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533137790938 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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