A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The main purpose of the high school is to provide diverse education to the students and make them adept to some extent- and also esure them to choose the appropriate education in colledges. Given prompt suggests that nation should provide same national curriculum nationwide prior to colledge. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the prompt because of the following reasons.
Firstly, imposing same curriculum all over the country facilates some of the parents and students to pursue their education in different schools. For instance, in this diverse world, people have different jobs; of course, jobs are required to accomplish at a particular location while some needs to migrate from one to another place- like the police or goverment officers. If a parent have to migrate due to their job, then the same curriculum helps to change their childrens' school frequently without much hampering their study. In the contrary, different curriculum would have impeded their childrens' education. So, same curriculum has great advantage in such scenario.
Similarly, similar curriculum also makes easier to evaluate the students' capacity and helps the colledge administration to successfully shortlist the suitable students. For instance, in modern days it has been the trend that student needs good scores in the high school in order to get enrolled to the colledge; so, the harmonious curriculum helps them to evaluate the students.
However, in some cases it can be proven more effective to provide some flexibility to adopt some extra elective subjects to the schools. For instance, in some communities where most of the families are agrarian, it seems more pragmatic to provide the elective subjects related to agriculture. These not only helps student to get knowledge about the agriculture; but also, it helps the education to apply in the field. These would lead to the personal and national development as a whole in long term.
In sum, the same curriculum helps to improve the educational status and make some families more easier to get educatioon as mentioned above, however, little flexibility will surely enhance to make it further effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rriculum all over the country facilates some of the parents and students to pursue their ed...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...culum also makes easier to evaluate the students capacity and helps the colledge adminis...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ucational status and make some families more easier to get educatioon as mentioned above, h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, then, while, for instance, of course, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27696793003 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75264672242 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533527696793 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1126983885 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17854497304 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671520110701 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754976292054 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935733992795 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468618380562 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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