UNIT 1 RURAL VS. URBAN AREAS
TOPIC 1 WRITING (40 minutes)
Write at least 250 words on the following topic:
Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in rural areas.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
More and more people have a tendency to move to the city center resulting in overwhelming and causing problems. This could be from many reasons, meanwhile, there are also many solutions for it.
Due to the benefits the city brings us, it attracts many people from other regions, especially those who are in the remote areas, lacking many things for their lives. Only a few minutes you can get what you want just for a while in a very nearby convenience store. While in the countryside it’s hard for you to buy something you want, it may be far from your house, and doesn't have a variety of choices for you. Besides its convenience, a job career is one of the most popular reasons why people move to the city. Companies, factories, investment, most of them concentrate on the city so people have to come here to find work easily.
With the two reasons above, basing on this we can grab up 2 corresponding solutions. Firstly, the government should put more focus on investment in the countryside, meet the local requirements related to their daily life like helping locals attract capital from foreign to develop their places, opening more stores for them to easily access to their needs. About job opportunities, there are two ways to improve it. with the first one, attracting investment from other companies, building factories, industrialization in the countryside to create jobs for people. Secondly, making use of the advantages of their place, like the paddy field, using technology or teaching people how to use it effectively to improve their life.
Generally, there are two main reasons why people immigrate to big cities. Therefore, in order to solve these problems of overpopulation in cities, we should focus on these to find the suitable solutions and help the people's lives get better.
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- UNIT 1 RURAL VS URBAN AREAS TOPIC 1 WRITING 40 minutes Write at least 250 words on the following topic Some people think that cities are the best places to live Others prefer to live in rural areas Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
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- What are the effects of the abrupt shift from offline learning to online learning and the reverse the abrupt shift from online learning to offline learning on university students 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ant, it may be far from your house, and doesnt have a variety of choices for you. Besi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92786885246 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76668863027 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0427244044 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0620344760569 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223334957678 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0178642495492 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396502687 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155018875195 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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