Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions
There are various problems that the young must deal with as a result of a rapid rise in both the difficulties and the size of the world's largest cities, and solutions should be provided to deal with them.
The two biggest difficulties that young people have to cope with are high cost of living and lack of job opportunities. Firstly, many major cities have a high cost of living, which can make it difficult for young people to find affordable housing, pay for education, and cover basic living expenses. This makes it difficult for young people to save money, especially if they are on entry-level salaries or working in low-paid jobs. Secondly, although metropolis can offer a range of job opportunities, competition for those jobs can be fierce. Many young people may struggle to find meaningful work, particularly if they lack the necessary skills or experience. For example, a recent college graduate who has only worked part-time jobs throughout their studies may find it difficult to secure a full-time job in their chosen field. Without relevant work experience, employers may be hesitant to hire them for higher-level positions.
To address these problems, there are several possible solutions that cities could implement. the first measurement would be governments can work to provide affordable housing options for young people. This could include building more affordable housing units or offering financial assistance for young people who are struggling to pay rent. Another possible solution should be investing in education and training programs can help young people develop the skills and experience they need to compete for jobs in the city.
In conclusion, there are various problems entailing this trend, and steps need to be taken to tackle those issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...th the difficulties and the size of the worlds largest cities, and solutions should be provide...
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Line 3, column 827, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
... secure a full-time job in their chosen field. Without relevant work experience, empl...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... solutions that cities could implement. the first measurement would be governments ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25174825175 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75974925525 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2762877997 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188113185259 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690369052767 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400930548436 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112584565125 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00976621618618 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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