Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While some argue that having a permanent job has a greater impact than job satisfaction, there are others who believe the opposite. From my perspective, job satisfaction is the more significant factor.
On the one hand, job guarantee is crucial for several reasons. In terms of financial stability, job security provides employees with a steady income, enabling them to meet their financial obligations which they may support for their family. They also can save some to plan for the future, such as higher education for their children. As a result, this eliminates the need to constantly search for new job opportunities. In addition, those who value growth and development usually prefer to stay in their jobs, even if they have to take on unpleasant tasks or work long hours, as it provides career advancement opportunities, such as training, mentorship, and promotions. For example, in Vietnam, an employee who has work for a company for more than 5 years is more likely to become a leader.
On the other hand, I believe that job satisfaction is more highly valued for several reasons. Firstly, it gives people a sense of fulfillment, which positively impacts their overall well-being. Therefore, they are more engaged in their work, it makes them feel more motivated, productive, and committed to their job, which can lead to better job performance. Moreover, employers are more likely to retain those who are high-performing employees, making sure that they also have job security. Secondly, a satisfying job can help reduce stress and anxiety, which, in turn, can improve mental health. For instance, my friend, who loves her job, is always full of energy and devotes her effort and time to working and living fully.
In conclusion, while some people argue that a job permanent offers a stable financial status and opportunities for job development, I think that job satisfaction plays a more important/ vital role when providing fulfillment and a good spirit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16510903427 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93239595734 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8841203507 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.533333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362770205468 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14012691369 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110798085042 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290219125368 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113601992038 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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