Some people believe that using a bicycle as a main form of transportation has a lot of advantages whereas others think it has many disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Make a bicycle as main transportation to underpin various of human activities carry positif impact in life, whereas this is important for remember that sometimes bicycle have divers detriment. In my opinion, bicycle have a big effect in life which is good or bad effect.
In other words, i agree that bicycle have ability to increase total of human health and can regulating pattern of healthy life. For example, one of the most eminent place in Indonesia is Kediri exactly Pare, there is place of student to establish their english knowledge, many people come to there to rise up their foreign language ability because of average human in there is not original inhabitants, hence native in there have initiative for rent the bicycle until every single person coming to their village will rent their bicycle and until now main transportation in there is bicycle and many benefit for using this one of them is loss the weight and their body became more healthy than previous. Moreover, using bicycle creating some place from free population because bicycle is one of the transport that nothing population and making clean weather. A good weather will give a lot of effect for life such as good for our blood because our blood circulation very depend from circumstances of surrounded.
Furthermore, set of bicycle as main transportation make the activities being slow down. It is because of when we use the bicycle its the same with we guzzle our time, people use this transportation usually for spend their leisure like in the afternoon after working they are ride a bicycle to look at around the situation and for making their body more fit. Whereas, bicycle can't using for doing important activities such as when someone go to office they are use the bicycle if the intervals between homestay and the company under 3 kilometers that is no problem, however they are will spend a lot of time on the street and cutting their time even can make their body became not fresh and feel tired when they are in company.
To conclude, i belive that bicycle have a lot of profit for life particularly in healthy life, but this transport made the activities being slowness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Line 2, column 594, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
... transportation in there is bicycle and many benefit for using this one of them is loss the ...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...t is because of when we use the bicycle its the same with we guzzle our time, peopl...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...g their body more fit. Whereas, bicycle cant using for doing important activities su...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...portant activities such as when someone go to office they are use the bicycle if t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, whereas, for example, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85135135135 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56005872148 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502702702703 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.24217707 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.5 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197343411093 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917019795445 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295481965025 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12482349413 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260530299745 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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